I just read the story and what can I say? The plot line in throughoutly brilliant. It's an interesting take on I must admit. Vlad and Danny brothers? First time I see it. I can keep bla-bla-bla for a long time so I'll just sum it up.
AWESOME!

i liked the story, even if it was rather hard to follow sometimes

Same old gang. ;)

Well considering that Connor is [metaphorically] his son, Supes really IS a "deadbeat dad."

YUS! This was amazing! Do you mind if I share it with my friends?

Got sucked straight into these last two chapters. That's what I like to get from a story.

Yay! Slyphine is EPIC! ...except for the valley-girl speak, that was just creepy. :

Cool.

Oh, crap. Ebedi is NOT happy.

I'm fairly sure that an unhappy Ebedi is worse than a raging Clockwork. Of course, I've never met a raging Clockwork...

I'm just going to shut up now. _

Very nice. Excellent work.

This is quite the amazing story and you are well deserved of the title of wordsmith.

Please continue, this is one of the only stories I am following seriously at the moment.

Con-San out.

Dear Sirensoundwave,

I really liked the creation myth you put into your story. It has some classical elements but also many that make it quite original as will as fitting in with the DP universe.

There seems to be some parts missing to fully explaining the story but there is enough foreshadowing to promise that the rest will be filled in as future chapters unfold.

I love this chapter :) Ok, so if Clockwork had another form and didn't remember it, and Nikkou and Oidhche were born again but didn't remember it or each other, does that mean that they're also in the story, just with different forms? Wait, the descriptions of black hair and red eyes for Oidhch and white hair and green eyes for Nikkou are like Vlad and Danny's ghost forms! Oh, and in earlier chapters it was mentioned that Danny and Vlad both balance each other! That's who they are! :D Please update soon!

...Wow. Lots of exclaimation marks...

-Birdie out

YES! NOW EVERYTHING MAKES SENSE! Jeez, I was confused for a while there, thanks for clearing it all up. c:

Don't worry Person! Young justice of the part of the DC nation that comes on saturday mornings on cartoon network. Wikipedia, Youtube and Cartoon network on demand can help with that. Actually everything you need to know you can probably get out of the wikipedia article. That's what I do and I find series I like crossed over with ive never heard of. Sometimes I find a brand new awesome show to watch. _

But I've never heard of Young Justice so how can I understand the sequel D: