Reviews for Not Everyone Makes It To The Top
Rainstar of ShadowClan 8/28/12 . chapter 2
This is amazing! The grammar is great, and the characters are developing well so far. I've always loved this series, so it's great to see the same characters in new views.
Longer chapters would be nice, but that's just my opinion. Can't wait to see what you do with this!
fannydemoor 6/11/12 . chapter 1
YOU GOT TO UPDATE! THIS IS SOO GOOD!this story is really good, it has lots of potential.
sadie h 4/13/12 . chapter 2
Great story! can't wait for more!
baygirl123 4/11/12 . chapter 2
Soooo good! Love it! This is a great story!
Kolkata 4/8/12 . chapter 1
Please tell me this is not a one shot! PLEASE UPDATE! This story is great! Write more chapters, or even seperate fics, but your writing style is great, and the everest series fanfiction archive needs more stories! If you need a beta, I know someone who is one...
Smarty pants 4/2/12 . chapter 1
Please update! Do one of cap!relly good
Koolkid 4/1/12 . chapter 1
TOTALLY LUV THIS STORY! NEED MORE. ! Sooooooooo GOOD
Funny girl 4/1/12 . chapter 1
LUv it! Do one of Bryns thoughts on meeting the Alexis brothers
Hell 2 the no 4/1/12 . chapter 1
GOT TO UPDATE! Best story evah! MAYBE DO A CHAPTER of Dominic going home?
Happy hippo 2019 4/1/12 . chapter 1
PLEASE UPDATE! Please! PLEAE ! I LOVE THIS STORY!
Catlover10101 4/1/12 . chapter 1
Totally like, great! This is awesome!
Batgirl 4/1/12 . chapter 1
Please update! I love this '!
baygirl123 3/29/12 . chapter 1
PLEASE UPDATE! There are only 3 everest series story's out there, and I need more! Please update as soon as start is grea!