Even if I knew it would happen at one moment or another, it's still painful.

I have a feeling she's going to lose Macbeth. . . wonderful story by the way.

Oh no. I think we know what's happening, and I knew we'd get here, but still doesn't make it any easier. Great job on the setup, and I'll be ready for the next update. :)

*hugs Andie* Aw, sweetheart! You just wait! You'll have fabulous adventures and a guy that deserves you. (Keep up the amazing work! Really enjoying it!)

I Love the details of Shepards childhood. Keep up with the good work!

This is really good stuff. The detail you're putting into it makes Shepard come alive. The events that are happening around her are shaping her into the woman we know she will become. Especially the last part about choices, knowing what's coming in her future and the decisions she will have to make. Looking forward to reading the rest.

I have not played Mass Effect, but I am really digging this story. Very interesting! More like an original fic, it seems... but then, I don't know the canon.

Cute story so far. The mindoir origin stories are always so heartwarming(and eventually heartbreaking).

You do a good job capturing her youth :)

Can't wait to read more!

Love this. I love the dynamic for a Mindoir background. Can't wait to read more. :)

Hi! Just thought I would drop you a quick one to say how much I'm enjoying this story so far, two chapters and I really am curious to see Andie grow into the Shepard we all love!

Keep it up ... Can't wait for the next chapter!

xJessx