Very very funny and also pretty much perfect! Your writing style makes me think of Noel Fielding's. I love Bollo throwing hairbrushes and fountain pens at people! Excellent, well done :)

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You have a lot of good humour going on here; you could probably write for the Boosh! Also, I'm loving the idea of a city full of Vinces glittering away... *sighs* Anyway, good work, and keep it up! :)

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Awesome idea to have a world of Vinces and Howards!

Can't wait for the next chapter.

"One montage later, he was a new man."

Love it! This is funny stuff. ]