*Sniffs*

And the sad thing is…I can really see this happening to Raphael.

*Sniffs*

This story was beautifully bitter…a double edged sword.

On one end, it was greatly, no, amazingly written.

However, the sadness that this story emits was like a slap to the face, the stinging effects are still lingering.

But I love it :D

I love every second of it :D!

You ROCK girl!

Keep on writing! Your stories always grab my interest :D!

Reading this was like a punch to the stomache...so very harsh, but so good at the same time. Wonderful job on this. I look forward to reading more.

It's unmistakable that could happen to Raph one day, considering how he is. Running into fights without thinking.

But who was the enemy that hurt him in the first place? I know Raph wouldn't try to kill himself.

Wow, that was heartbreaking! I'm seriously holding back tears right now :'( sensational work!

Alura xx

Damn... Bummer... That really sucks... Love it

Que historia tan triste! Pobre Rafa! Es horrible morir sin que nadie este acompañándole .

There is no need for Leonardo to lecture you, Benny! I WILL DO IT! You had wrote it three months ago and you didn't share it with us, that's cruel... :D

Now I understand why Leo is always so worried about his hothead brother, to die far from the loved ones must be so... bitter. I know Leo wouldn't like one of his little brothers to die alone. This was just great. You are improving so much, but I will do it too o . Dear Benny, thank you so much. It was beatiful again.

I can't leave things like this... one of this days you will see a story dedicated to you!

Rose :P

*hug* Gracias peque. -

I love it, but it also has another feeling to me...

You know what i mean right?

oh uh...

I would fricking run if I were you...oh wait...we already got them after us xD

wonder if they get one or both of us?

but i don't like that you let Raph die all by him self T_T