| Reviews for The Fall of the House of Grabiner |
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HD is not High Definition 6/10/12 . chapter 1I find it AMAZING that you started and finished this story in 2 MONTHS. Your skills in writing are seriously amazing |
HD is not High Definition 6/10/12 . chapter 8This really is amazing... one thing I admire about the game Magical Diary is that I feel that the makers really went the extra mile to make you believe the place and the people in the game are so real... Your story is really similar; the effort and time you put in it clearly SHOW. It's extraordinarily done! |
HalcyonBird 6/3/12 . chapter 27This was such a good story, I'm so sad it has to end, even if the end is quite good, it's like a promise but it is true that I would've like to read more of their time together... Anyway, thanks for writing this story |
IonaLaylaIshtar 6/1/12 . chapter 27... OHM MY GOD no no no no no end noooooooo ;_; oh my god, man. that was amazing. truly and honestly that was amazing. thank you so much for writing it. .. |
Kuro 5/31/12 . chapter 27 You can't be serious! This can't be the end! Please, please, PLEASE make an epilogue or something! |
TrinityKarose 5/30/12 . chapter 27Oh hell no. This needs an epilouge. Or maybe that's just the part of me that hates endings talking. ;A; |
kurobizz 5/28/12 . chapter 26 EPILOGUE! EPILOGUE! This calls for a two year skip to when Eliza gets into Oxford and meets with Grabnier again! Oh, but will they still be married? |
Mldy96 5/28/12 . chapter 26Oh, you totally made it worth for me to stay up all night for this update! I felt that Eliza will make that decision, and you swept me off my feet with those sweet (and not so innocent) Grabiner moments. Now I'm really excited what will happen in the following years! |
IonaLaylaIshtar 5/26/12 . chapter 25;asdfkasfja;sdlfl. Oh crap man. I'm thinking, she could not know how to say "i'm going to go back to Iris Academy" OR "i'm staying here with you." Both of them... I don't know how he'd react. D8 Also I totally might have sort of had the really tiny tear with the Tabby scene- she was just so cute! Aaah, thank you for the update. You're wonderful. 3 |
Mldy96 5/25/12 . chapter 25Whoa, I wasn't expecting so sooooo much excitement while reading this (just soooo much), but with suck twists and turns... Ouch, my troath hurts from fangirlscreaming for a bit too long, but oh well... Yosh, I can barely wait till Tuesday dawn 4 AM (that's when you usually publish the next chapter in Hungarian time) to read the next part! |
IonaLaylaIshtar 5/25/12 . chapter 24fjjjfflsssssssssseojdfo I cannot express my my feelings towards this fanfiction holy brimfire and hellstone I just I please continue please continue please please please holy crap I'm sitting here with the biggest fever I've ever had and emotional problems up the ass and I read this and I haven't slept in 80 hours and each time I was like 'okay hold on just one more chapter/I'll finish this chapter and then I'll go to bed' I totally never stopped reading pelase ;conwnsofl;hsvndvjnd see even my fingers are just like 'whoa that was awesome' please continue ; w ; Your writing style is fantastic and it pulls me in and very much DOES NOT LET MY SLEEPY ASS GO And I just love the way you've kept all of the characters in character but still put your own sort of twist on them, yeah? asfsgsjfg I love you will you marry me I mean I love you will you be my friend fgadfjsjsshjsohj;sflihkjg |
fandrastic 5/23/12 . chapter 1wow... I love pretty much everything about this. it's perfect. everything is so vivid and true to not only the game, but to life. excellent work, and thank you for sharing this with us! x |
HalcyonBird 5/22/12 . chapter 23Very good chapter as always! I don't know what to think about Professor Postdam, can't tell if she is bad or not... |
HalcyonBird 5/19/12 . chapter 22Eliza is so brave! Your story is so intense and really well planed and written, I can't wait until the next update! |
TrinityKarose 5/17/12 . chapter 1*random crowd* OOOOOOHHHHHHHHHH SNAP! Dude, I can't WAIT to read the next chapter! This is so intense! XD |