| Reviews for His Butler, Attractable |
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Thegraybluekitten 1/4/13 . chapter 1:) What a great one-shot. |
blackfirefox987 8/16/12 . chapter 1i really like it. it was really hot but cute at the same time. well done |
Freddy 5/16/12 . chapter 1 Nice. Only a few suggestions, more discriptive details, more foreplay and the term 'family jewels' is a reference not everyone will understand. Happy writing. |
oneforfall 4/23/12 . chapter 1DUDE! that's so cute! I love this story.. but you should have made them confess in the end though (about their feelings) *thinks for a minute to check* or did I just miss that? but anyway... check your sentences next time.. some made me read twice. I know that you're in this super excited and erotic trance as you wrote this down but dont forget to review your work! and I guess I'm not too used to reading in present tense (was it?). But I still love your story! |
cassidieissocoollike 4/20/12 . chapter 1LOVED IT! lol the last line was kinda sad though because it shows an end regardless that was great |
OotakiKenta 4/8/12 . chapter 1LOL i didnt know Sebby could do such things...i loved it! |
Magic-Shipping 4/8/12 . chapter 1*Crii* So...lemony But t'is cute at Le same time. Is a perfect, Si? |
Sebas-chan001 4/3/12 . chapter 1 Hot hot hot! Ga suki! I loved the fact that Sebastian was outside his room the entire time. Funny stuff. :) |
DarkDeepWater129 4/3/12 . chapter 1I liked it :3 |
Freekness 4/1/12 . chapter 1HOT! HOT! HOT! HOT! HOT! HOT! HOT! HOT! HOT! HOT! HOT! HOT! HOT! HOT! HOT! HOT! HOT! HOT! HOT! Well that all i got to say except for... Oh Yeah... HOT! XD (You get a cookie for the awesome story!) |
promocat 4/1/12 . chapter 1more one shots & more long stories(about ciel & sebastian of course!) |
Hiei Dragon Girl 3/31/12 . chapter 1*clapping* yay! It was amazing! Cain: hai very good Jarick: . *has his ears covered* YDA: don't mind Jarick he isn't a fan of Yaoi so he is currently trying to block out the images. Anyways awsome story sissy! |