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  Sentry 5/18/13 . chapter 5 GRRRRR DRUITT. I never understood why. |
 insufferablyteslen 4/23/13 . chapter 17I'm so happy you are continuing this story :) |
| minderismeer 8/15/12 . chapter 15 Wow, cannot wait till we know what the effect of the machine will be! |
| insufferablyteslen 6/24/12 . chapter 13 Glad you're back! Where to go... Hmmm... Creepy Druitt creeps her out or maybe she asks him questions he won't answer. She realizes Nikola is right about him. Maybe a heart to heart with Henry? Then Nikola charms her but wants her to remember, he wants his Helen back, and they try everything they can to get her memory back even if she remembers the things that she doesn't like about him. More stories about their adventures? Ashley? His regrets? What he loves about her? If Druitt leaves, maybe Nikola decides to stay no matter what, because he is her best friend over anything else. Then she gets her memory back, realizes Nikola really loves her, and happily ever after? :D Can Nikola's blood save her? Maybe her memories are still in there somewhere? So many things you can do with it! Please keep writing! |
| Sparky She-Demon 6/24/12 . chapter 13 ARRGH! Good little chapter, like the dress, but I don't like who gets to see her in it! You still have exams to take? Ouch! I would like to see some more Teslen antics, but whatever they may be is up to you. Can't wait for more. |
| planet p 6/3/12 . chapter 12 I absolutely adore this story! Please keep writing, when you have time... :) |
| chartreuseian 5/31/12 . chapter 12 Oooh, love it! Full of suspense! Good luck with your exams :) |
| minderismeer 5/23/12 . chapter 11 Very sweet chapter. Lovely story so far. Up to the next chapter ;-) xo |
| naiad8 5/10/12 . chapter 11 This is so perfect! What happens next, please? You are marvelous |
| insufferablyteslen 5/6/12 . chapter 11 Aww, much better. Really good! I love their friendship so much, even if it is impossible to define sometimes. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter! :) |
| insufferablyteslen 5/6/12 . chapter 10 Ugh creepy Druitt. You wrote it so well, but still, ugh. :-P I had to go back and read chapter 9 again after this, because... ugh! :) He needs to go teleport off a cliff, into some solid rock or something... |
| Sparky She-Demon 5/6/12 . chapter 11 One thing that I hope no one's ever said to Nikola is: "Its better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all". That would be beyond cruel. Don't you think? I'm really liking the story, can't wait to see more! |
| chartreuseian 5/6/12 . chapter 11 Loved the last bit! It was exactly what I was worried about with this. For all Nikola loved the old Helen, I was hoping for a nod towards the Helen she had become too :) |
| beautiful.love.3 5/6/12 . chapter 11 oh so sweet..i love this story and cant wait to find out why John seemed so sure she want get her memories back |
| chartreuseian 5/5/12 . chapter 10 Oh my god John just needs to be run over with a bus. |
