Wow. Just... wow. That was... I've never read anything like it. The language flowed like poety, so beautiful. I'm speachless, it's so wonderful. Great job.

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This has to be the most thorough, intense, no-holds-barred SW alternate universe I've ever read. O.O
I'm simply flabbergasted at your ability to tell a story, and how everything unraveled at just the right time; that there's such optimism at the end was such a relief from the war's constant barrage of pain and violence. You achieved a brilliant AU, IMO, and though I was a bit skeptical at times (like Brummel/Sabe instantly falling in love?!), your talent at weaving the tale kept me reading until the end.
DEFINITELY one of the best sagas I've ever read in ANY fandom universe. And my new favorite! :D

Oh good Lord, Sabe AND Crinnin AND Goren out for the count??! You, dear author, are ruthless. But, such is war.
Your ability to write these battle scenes so vividly is insane. I could picture EVERYTHING, which is pretty hard, considering how I tend to zone out reading fight scenes. But this is just fantastic. O.O

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I probably should have left reviews for earlier chapters (like Anakin's death, because HOMG! YOU KILLED HIM!), but I just HAD to comment on this one: Oh, you had me on the edge of my seat during this chapter! Deep down, I knew Obi-Wan would be alright, but I was SO friggin' worried for Brummel! You've fleshed out this amazing character, and I would've wailed in agony if he had fallen. :P
::off to read more!!::

whoa. that was a heavy book! Geez. Everyone dies except O,P,and B and the new L, and of course Y.

ah. nice. I was hoping padme would start repopulating the earth before the end. with triplets or something. lol.

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great characterizations!

AWESOME! I TOOK THE TIME TO READ THE WHOLE THING PAGE AFTER PAGE AD IT WAS THE BESST STORY I HAV READ IN A LONG TIME. IT'D BE NICE TO HAVE A FOLLOW UP TO OBI AND PADME'S FUTURE.

Wow, good job on describing the emotions. It doesn't get schmaltzy, and to the point of where we can relate, because we've all experienced this type of goodbye at some point in our lives...

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Amazing story I am not sure if I ever reviewed it.
Six years is a long time for a story.
It took me a couple of days but I read it all.

Great story and perfect ending.

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I demand more! ;D

The bedroom scene is so beautiful (Padmé putting Obi-Wan to bed) - he turns towards her like a leaf to the sun.

Loved it!

Wow. Superb endinng. Loved reading this story, it has brought many hours of delight. Ahah. You're a terrific writer. Extermly talented. It's been a pleasure to read this story.

It's over? No! Honestly, I hope you plan to give yourself something amazing in return for all of the thought and effort you put into this. Not once did the characters or the action falter, they were wonderfully consistant and the story was just riveting with great allusions to the films. The ending chapters have been lovely and as always the action scenes were spot on! Just a fantastic story from start to finish. One I will definitely re-read. Congratulations on finishing this super story!

I really did like it! I'm so glad you finally updated. It was really good!