This is a good story, but I would like to draw your attention to something in chapter 3:

"They started to date when Teddy was 17, and Victoire was 15. They kept dating up until they were both 21"

I'm a bit confused about this sentence- was time-travel involved, as they couldn't have both been 21 at the same time, which is what this sentence is implying. Are they 19 and 21 or 21 and 23?

Apart from that one little thing which caught my eye (and that could just be me mis-interpreting like normal!), I really enjoyed this, so please don't take that too harshly!

A'tuinIsLost

this is amazing darci! keep up the good work!