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| Book Worm 4.0 2003-03-12 ch 2,  | abuseI can totally feel the mood! I know I'm kind of piling requests for updates on you, but encouragement is good, right? |
| Barbara LeMaster 2003-01-30 ch 2, anon. | abuse*curses Author Alerts* If the darn thing actually worked, I would've known you'd updated. And I am happy to see the same attention to detail and characterization that made your first chapter such a pleasure to read. Now that Clare's rebuilt herself from the inside out, now what? We shall wait and see. Update soon, please? ^_^ |
| Cadmuse 2002-12-08 ch 1, | abuseThe quote isn't much good, and again, your foray into realism meets with melodrama and underdeveloped angst. Try again. Or don't. And cut back on the description. You probably think it's poetic - it's not. |
| Lightning-Strike 2002-11-28 ch 2, | abuseYAY!!! THANK YOU RAIKOU!! *worships Raikou* Lights: Grow up. LS: What, don't you believe in the power of Raikou? *hugs her Raikou plushie* Lights: *sweatdrop* You're so pathetic. LS: *points to her Raikou wallpaper on the computer* Lights: *sweatdrop grows; sweatdrop pops and soaks the Raichu* LS: *cackles insanely* |
| Barbara LeMaster 2002-11-21 ch 2, anon. | abuseA stunning coming-of-age story. Raikou's gift to Loren appeared to be self-belief and strength. Again, this is a great story. |
| Barbara LeMaster 2002-11-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseI read a review you had written for another fic and I'm very glad I checked out your works as well. This is a stunningly detailed fantasy fic set in the Pokemon world. Your writing skills belie your age; this is terrific. |
| tremor3258 2002-10-22 ch 1, | abuseHmm, there's a bit going on we're not privy to yet. Definitely angsty in quality, and the grammar's in good shape. It feels... very early in this story for some reason. I'm not sure if the AU's supposed to be our world with a few Pokemon added, or our world with the game. Still, I'm definitely inclined to hang around and find out! |
| Mabgath 2002-10-02 ch 2, | abuseThis story keeps getting better and better. I love the descriptions, and the portrayal of emotion. |
| Mabgath 2002-07-24 ch 1, | abuseI *love* this! The portrayal of Clare's emotions was wonderful, and it was incredibly well-written and pretty! Will you be continuing with it, though, or is it intended to be single-chapter? |
| TopazSoarhire 2002-06-07 ch 1, | abuseVery cool! I love your fleshing of your character Clare and the Raikou portrayal is awesome! |
| Miss Black Dragon 2002-05-31 ch 1, | abuseThis is great, absolutely beautiful. You should continue this, as it is still questionable in some aspects, i.e. what's the Red Pandemic? |
| Lightning-Strike 2002-05-26 ch 1, | abuseI remember this!! I still have the E-mail with this in it!! This is such an awesome story...WHEN WILL YOU POST MORE!! I WANT MORE!! As in, NOW!! Oh, this is good...I know exactly how Clare feels. It's how I feel every single school day. I CAN RELATE TO IT!! Lightning: Don't go out of control, LS. LS: Kay. *smiles at her Raichu, who sweatdrops* Please put more of this up! Bye! |
| Petal Breeze 2002-05-25 ch 1, | abuseIf I ride the wings of the morning, if I dwell by the farthest oceans, even there Your hand will guide me, and your strength will support me. I like that verse! I may memorize it ^_^ |