|Reviews for When The Silence Speaks|
| Allie Salvatore 7/11/12 . chapter 1
That was beautiful. Really.
| Shira Lansys 7/11/12 . chapter 1
Oh my god it's you. And it's a competition that I also entered. How did I miss reading this?
I just tracked this from a tumblr account which I found from about five different deamus related tumblr accounts which I got from google images (so basically I've been chasing loose Deamus threads all night), when the forum post is probably still sitting in my inbox.
Sorry, I had to share that. I looked at the username and thought "Huh, small world".
Anyway, onto the actual review.
Omg this story was amazing and sad and... that last line! It was so sad! Dx
As brilliant as ever!
| Satan Abraham 4/12/12 . chapter 1
Well that was depressing. Good, but depressing.
| Mr Bellatrix Lestrange 4/2/12 . chapter 1
I really like how you made this work. I loved the line about them having to deal with it because it was the life that they had. A point I'm sure we're all aware of. And the line about the "the silence stopped speaking," because really I could analyze the heck out of that, it's just so majestically metaphoric and symbolic. Although, I guess I didn't read much into the title then, but hey. One day I vow to analyze a story of yours completely. And now I'm super excited... /done digressing/. Fantastic job.
| soulback 4/2/12 . chapter 1
So beautiful and sad. Think I might actually be crying a little :_(
| Fire The Canon 4/1/12 . chapter 1
I don't go much for this pairing (though I do ship the bromance), but this was a good piece. It was sweet and cute and, yeah, it can be counted as fluff. My definition of fluff is basically anything romantic :)
This fic had me on edge, especially at the beginning. I was really curious to keep reading to find out what happened. And your writing is really nice and flows well. Didn't see any spelling or grammar errors or anything. Well done.
And nice use of the prompt :) Very sweet. Well done!
| Minx of Lynex 4/1/12 . chapter 1
I adore the pairing Seamus/Dean, simple as that. And you write them splendidly! I like the time that you chose for this story, when Dean couldn't go back to Hogwarts and Seamus had to go through the seventh year without him. I was already crying with this from around the end of the second paragraph and sobbed all the way through the 'don't go's and 'please stay's. This was such an emotional piece, my favorite kind of piece. I love something that truly makes me feel. I also like that you brought the prompt from Round 1 into this, even if you didn't mean to. That was really amazing, I loved it. Before I go into a rant of how good this was, I'm gonna end this here. This was very good and I loved it! Great job! :)
| MissingMommy 4/1/12 . chapter 1
Officially, I get blame you for another pairing I like. :D Anyways, on with the review. I felt the tension between the boys and the silence.
I only saw two mistakes, "he's going to hide is Mum" - I think you mean "his". And "when he's really falling apart for the sheer worry of it" - I'm not sure but something off in your wording...
But you also had some really great lines like "beacuse Seamus doesn't want to go backward. He just doesn't want to go forward, either" and "it's full of all the things they don't want to say, because saying it makes them real"
Overall, I loved it :D