make the next chapter! i love it!

So many signs yet humans are so oblivious

Impossible Dreamers
Dreamer

Cute. That's all I have to say. there isn't much to really give feedback on except it's good. Really good. Thanks for making it

*facepalm* Black you idiot. How can you be so slow? Don't worry White he knows now. And if he forgets... *brings out mallet* Heh heh heh... Was that the Elite Four Agatha? Oh well. Can't wait to see more! ;)

What the hell? Black! White! Just kiss each other already! It's killing me damn it! Oh well, people will be people XD

Dreamer

Wow...what people do for the one's they love. I'll never understand it XD Anyway, yeah who doesn't gravity is an actual Pokemon move?

Team Plasma? Just when the mood was being set. I'll never forgive them!

Ahh those were the days. Being stalked by random strangers

ok god is so good. please please update the next chapter this is so good I love the battle scene. poor White someone save her!

Cool!
Keep updating please, and hurry!

dude...suspense. Thanks for updating this is on of my favorite stroies!

Awesome story, please update with regularity.

Make them kiss already, it's clear theylike each other. Hope the upcoming updates are as good as the current story!

cute

Normally, I would write a longer review, but I'm short on time, so I'll just summarize this chapter in one word. Cute. Yeah. Sorry. Shoe on time. Gotta go.

that's just funny. i quote, 'for more PAIN that's why!'. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAA hilarious! keep on writing these fanfics and please stick to one game for now. i really want to know the ending!
i am TOTALLY OBSESSED, as my name clearly states. post soon!