This story is amazing. I really wish you were still updating it. I find the interplay between the characters and the back story with Wen Yun and Li interesting as well. I can't wait until you update again, if you find the time to. It is a very interesting storyline. :)

hun means enemy, not mongolian

I absolutely love this story! Please update! I think Mulan will be kidnapped soon! Uh oh! Keep up the awesome work!

Keep updating.

Plzzz update

I don't believe that Shang would say "y'all". If you're southern, then I understand; I've got that problem when I write as well, but as he's Chinese and America wasn't discovered yet...just a suggestion.

love it, please keep updating

I think that in China in those days it was illegal to have physical contact with the opposite sex until you were married, but aside from that, I liked this again :)

I think this is freaking amazing! I love the way you work with the characters, and how you keep bringing in these dark moments with Wen Xun. I like the joke at the end of the chapter as well. I feel so bad for Mulan with Fa Li's amnesia, and I like the little "I'm afraid because I love him" comment. I feel that statement is SO true. All around, bravo! Thanks for posting and can't wait to see more,

Bookworm

Keep posting chaps.

Love the srory. Keep on going!

Wow, I really like this story! You do a great job with the keeping the characters true and you have a cool storyline going on. By the way, how do you know the grandmother and mother's names? I also really like the snippets of memory in some of the chapters. Thanks for posting and I can't wait to see what happens next! I'll be waiting!

Bookworm

Interesting twist! Keep going!

when r u going to post the new chapter?

What'll happen next then?