Keep going!This is getting so exciting!:)

Please tell me you're going to keep going with this, I like it and I want to hear more! I'll be waiting ;)

OMG hi. XDD this is probably the first fic i've read where kirby can say something more than 'poyo.' the way you portray everyone makes me so happy, and meta knight is AWESOME. isn't his face adorable? lawl he'd stab me if he was real ] so update soon please?

OI! Where da rest of it?

Continue soon plz! I have nothing to do all day but...well...nothing.

TTFN

Good story so far! I love evil Meta Knight! I really do love the character you are putting into Meta Knight and Kirby. And it would be amazing if they were related. Siblings anyone?

*would very much like to read more*

YAY! YOU UPDATED!

_ Please continue soon. Suspense kills me!

cool story,i cant waitfor the next chapter this story is getting good ,but i think meta-knight is kirbys father cuz,well,this is my opinion:meta-knight is a mysterious person so as kirby,they both look alike,like a child look like his or her parents,and my final is they both look so cute

Why are you bashing MetaKnight? I may not know if he was evil in the game but man youre' bein' mean ! Poor meta!

Leta-Knight:You tell 'em noone bashes my mate!Not even me!

This is so cool, I wanna read more! and weird as this sounds, this almost sounds like it could be slashy, but i'm a weirdo, so anyway, continue!

Where's this story being continued? I wannna know! Please tell me.

that was good! Please continue!

o.0 ...

COOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLL!

Great fic! Can't wait for the second chappie! -

*nods in approval* Liking it, liking it. Well written, good form, good syntax, few to no spelling or grammar errors, likable story. Can't wait for more.