| Reviews for Mad World |
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blackicelycan 1/12/13 . chapter 1I loved this it was a very interesting way to do the story line. It was enjoyable all the way through I hope you continue it on. |
Angels-heart1 4/29/12 . chapter 1Great story. Really enjoyed it. |
A Unicorn 4/10/12 . chapter 1Clever choice of the sub-plot to work on! Also nicely developed. The structure, theme and dialogues can become stronger, by the way. Good luck! |
shipper-swabbie 4/8/12 . chapter 1Loved this! I'm wondering why it took me so long to read! I love how you wrote Emma's longing for a family in there, it really fit in with the story, but in a really quiet, subdued sort of way. Excellent! |
theD0ct0rD0nna 4/2/12 . chapter 1Please update soon. I love this so far! |
Dr.Zebra 4/2/12 . chapter 1 Ugh so freaking adorable :D There needs to be more stories like this. And please continue Family Portrait! It's one of my favorites, I love Emma/Mary Margaret bonding fics |
annamw15 4/2/12 . chapter 1Beautiful! |
xiwang.love 4/2/12 . chapter 1That was lovely. I really liked how you showed the parallels between Emma and the Mad Hatter and their relationship with their children. This was my favorite line and made so sad: "It pains her to know someone who would give everything and then some to spend the rest of his life with her." |