Wow, just wanted to say bravo. This was easily one of the best stories I've read, fanfiction or otherwise. The characters were never out of character more than their situation made them be. I am highly impressed with the amount of wit displayed here. Lots of people try to write like this, but few acheive it. Loved how it played out, from begining to end.

For writing my favorite Urusei Yatsura fanfic (and in general), I've got to commend you.

First, you did a great job keeping the characters in character, and don't go astray like Pyeknu does in his epic "Senior Year." In particular, your portrayal of Ataru's many complexities deserves merit.

Next, your writing is excellent, as well. It's been some time since I read your story but I don't remember encountering many spelling errors, and I'm not finding any in a quick glance over the last chapter. However, your sharp wit hasn't left my memory so quickly, and I'm still puzzling over the double-and-triple meanings in your mind-boggling conclusion. Fantastic work, overall.

Just like your depiction of the characters, the plot is also something I would expect to see in an Urusei Yatsura episode. It fits nicely into the crazy world, while still having a nice degree of originality. Also, your open ending is within bounds of the series, and is great (despite leaving me wanting more).

Unlike most stories I read, I don't really have anything negative to say about what you've written here. I consider it one of the more deserving stories to have a place on my list of favorites, and offer you my highest praise. My only problem with reading your story was checking out your profile later and finding out that you haven’t written anything else.

Wow. I laughed so hard I cried. You ended that beautifully. I'm sad to see it end, but this really is the best story I have ever read.

I just... wow. So great. So beautiful. So funny. *laughs and collapses to the ground... again* Thank you, Raoh. *bows* Thank you very much for that wonderful story.

*giggles*

ROFLMAO! "Never since their last humiliating defeat had the SDF suffered such a humiliating defeat"...

Beautiful. Simply beautiful. I

Wow! You finally continued it! YAYS! *does a very, very happy dance*

This is, BTW, my favorite fanfic ever. It is seriously the most enjoyable story I have ever read. *bows lots to Raoh* And now I go to read the next part... *plunges forward into the unknown*

*returns suddenly*

*mallet Raoh with a large hammer*

And THAT's for making me wait so long!

For not being familar with Urusei Yatsura, or anime in general, I'm really enjoying this story. I like the Terry Pratchet-esqe layout (can one plagerise a writing style?), even if it confused me at first because I wasn't expecting it.

I can't say whether the characters are out of context or not, but they seem to be keeping with the characteristics that you've outlined in this story. All in all, very very well done for a first attempt at writing.

Now, clean your room, feed the cats, and tell mom I'll call her sometime this weekend.

- your loving and wonderful sister

P.S. Make the "submit a good review" check payable to Cash. ;-)

Funny, funny story. Should I hope for the final part sometime this year?

Hurray! You updated!

I really liked this chapter, it was almost painful reading when Ataru kept going after Sakura - I expected he would have caved in to Lum by that point, but I suppose it's just not in his nature.

Anyways, I hope there isn't too long a wait until the next chapter, 'cause I just know it's gonna be good!

Why make 6 the last part? This is easily one of the best Urusei Yatsura fanfictions out there, but it also falls under the rare catergory as well seeing as how it is of the very few Urusei Yatsura fanfiction out there now. If you want to stop, then it's perfectly fine, but you have so much potential for this series, maybe you could try smaller episodes or make small side stories for it in the future. Hope I don't sound negative, just wanted to give you some feedback. Keep up the good work too, hope to see A.R. Prt. 6 in the future and any other Urusei Yatsura fanfics you might decide to make as well.

Well worth the wait. A pleasure to read. I look forward to the final chapter.

Come on and continue with the story, it really freakin' hilarious. This is one of the best UY fanfics that I've read in a while.

I love this! Some of the characters are a little OOC, but it fits with the context of the story, so I can't fault that.

I especially like the misunderstandings between Mendou/Sakura and Ataru/Lum.

PLEASE CONTINUE THIS!

Good, but I feel like the characters are kinda not true to their nature so much. Maybe it is just me, but when did Lum get such a vocabulary?-J

(NOTE:This is a review for all four parts)sorry about the other messed up review..I hit enter before I was finished so here's the full review for all 4 chapters. nothing short of amazing here...this is the first Urusei Yatsura fan fic I've read and theres almost no doubt in my mind that it will not be topped. My knowledge of the series isn't all that great but I did know enough about the show to enjoy this amazing fic right to the end. Keep up the amazing work! 10/10

(NOTE:This is a review for all four parts)nothing short of amazing here...this is the first Urusei Yatsura fan fic I've read and theres almost no doubt in my mind that it will not be topped. My knowledge of the series isn't all that great but