Hey! You haven't updated in a while but I hope you continue with this - it's off to a really fun start. I have to admit I wasn't expecting much from the summary, you might want to change that a bit. In your summary maybe just add what the story's gonna centre around, or give a mini introduction to your OC, something to make people interested.

Your OC has gotten me curious about her, and I like how you portray Shin, too! You're really doing him justice, and the other characters as well! Hope you update this!

It's interesting so far. :)

Hehe I like it so far :)