I realy like the story but 1 problem for me I HATE PERCABETH D: Can you do Pertemis :)

I am loving the story but I have to go I'll post a longer review later okay bye!
Keep it up!

love it can not wait for the next chapters!

good chapter, quite an original plot line

i really liked this chapter hope you write more soon

not bad at all, very very good

Kane is a bit more social than i think he should be but i like the part about him respecting percy

as for the whole Gaia rising and all that, it's a good touch, keep writing

addio per ora, il mio amico

good chapter

nice chapter i really like the thought of percy being a god keep tiping

When Are You gunna Continue The Storry Im wating To See What happened To Percy.! :)

I think it awsome update please!

I love this story, keep on going!

one thing: the gods were to involved

at the battle of the labyrinth the gods didn't help even though Kronos himself was supposed to be there

he wasn't but i doubt they would have shown up either way

now percy is understandable since the camp is his domain and he was defending it

but not the other olympians

also Hestia is major pacifist so there would have been no way in hades to get here to fight

there even some myths where she even faked fighting in the first titan war

so that was a bit out of character

the chaos thing: i don't know what to say to that, it was odd no doubt about it, and you were only joking but in the future just don't throw something like that in at the middle of the chapter

percy: he's immortal so he can't die but maybe put him in a coma for awhile or just heal him, it's your call

everything else was superb, keep writing

Your avid reader,

Oblivion Scourge

arrivederci

AWESOME! I loved how pisses he got! Sweet chapter! Poor Annabeth:(

i think this chapter was really good, and that you should sooo update soon!:D good chapter!

good chapter, i enjoyed it alot