A very creative way to incorporate the Ojamas Red and Blue. I love Manjoume stories like this; it's cute, it's family-oriented, it's funny. Faved!

Cool story! Not too long or too short, nice description of the trek, and the Red/Chosaku pair-up was hilarious!

Great story, can't wait for the next.

Ahhhhh over too soon! That was a great read, thank you.

This story could be summed up with one word...

Brilliant.

It was in-character and well written. There was not anything that bothered me or that needed to be addressed. I was glad you didn't split up the Ojama brothers to go with Manjoume's brothers. I got a little worried that might happen. Ojama Red and Blue were a good addition to the team.

It is good to see a positive Manjoume/Chazz story where he is getting on better terms with his brothers and still keeping them in-character and smug as always.

D'awww, so cute! I love a good family fic and this is one of the best ones. I can't think of anything offhand that would make it better. Well done!

Oh man. I haven't read any GX fics in a while, mostly b/c it's ended and frankly, I haven't seen a lot that have caught my interest, but THIS is one that is much different than like 90% of what's out there: it's an introspective not only on Manjoume, but his family as well. Plus, it's well-written and I'm interested in reading about other characters aside from Judai and his buddies all the time.

I hate you even more now... you're making me wait for the next chapter! You're tortuing me...! Please update soon! Pretty please with... microchips on top!

I wish I could express coherently how awesome this is. The best I can do is an incoherent squee. The characterizations are lovely, the writing extremely awesome, and the world-building (the little bits about their parents/etc., the marketplace) divine. A work of art!

That was so COOL please write another story soon!

I hate you. You dare leave an amazing story just...just...just HANGING? How dare you! Please continue! I love it!

Ahhh, you're back on GX? This pleases me no end.

Already awesome, I loved the vision of domesticity a la Misawa and Taniya in particular, and your treatment of Pegasus, and, well, just everything with the brothers.

I'll just leave you this towel to mop up my fangirly drool.

I don't think words have yet been invented for how much I love this fic. It's more than the accurate characterizations. It's the treatment of certain characters who are far too often villainized and bashed. I could gush for hours...but I've done that to you elsewhere already. So this is just a more public statement of "AWESOME FIC!"