HURRY up and update! I really want to see what happens next its really good!

nice..:)

Like this chapter!

Good job on the improvise my idea, it's really creative.

hoping the next chapter will be great ;)

Like this chapter!

Good job on the improvise my idea, it's really creative.

hoping the next chapter will be great ;)

yay wow! had been long since you update it though... :)

Nice... LOVE IT! continue updating please, just don't rush, we're here to wait for the best

Wow long time no see! First of all the last update which I read and leave a review I think you exaggerated the paragraphs. The skips were so long that makes it only a sentence.

Well in this chapter of your it is great the paragraphs were now fine but you should put some more describing words for each character to make their self clearer eventhough I see what I want and that is the describing words I just wnt you to improve more.

Umm also it's been a long time since you updated that sure a long writer's block I haven't experience that though but laziness in writing maybe when I have an idea but still do not want to write! You know what I mean?

Oh well! Wish you update again I like this story of yours I'll be waiting for your next update!

happy Writing!

Hey! normaly, I don't read english story because I am french from France and I have difficulty in english... But I did read this story with the help of reverso(it's a translator) and it's amazing! Keep going can't wait for next yay

this story is so good *_*

reviews

amy's dialogs rock!

the story has chaos written all over it

really like it when arme call lass, mr albino guy xD

and lastly

the 6 guys are like so cool when I imagine them

keep it up ms author xD u a girl? sorry if i called you ms... for who knows who

wish you update fast

WOOO...W, very interesting, I can't say much, update please... update(but I don't mind, don't be such in a hurry just do your best)

Can't wait for next! actually I was waiting two weeks ago for next chapter and I am waiting again! Can you put chapter 7 this week? Pleaaaaaase? :)

LOVE it!

Creative : Yeeeeessss

Romantic: Duuuhh :P

Funny: Always!

You got all in your story that make it amazing! Keep going I can't wait for next heehee .

I really like your story ,if i may suggest why don't you use arme magic to re new the school while other use their ability to clean the "leftover" in the next chapter if you know what i mean.

By the way,

I'm in love with grand chase my keep your story creative! ;)

Update soon,i can't wait for the next chapter.

Yay you use my idea! :) I am happy :) And I really love this chapter :3 ! Can't wait for the next one :)

Oh talking about that, if you want another suggestion you could make the guys asking the girl to go to a festival and make some cute scene with the personnality of each character like for example:

Arme and Lass are always arguing but Lass care about Arme... So he could lend his jacket... or if it rain Lass could share his umberella...

Or Elesis could bump into Ronan and then they fell together and Elesis in top of Ronan...

Im am just saying suggestion you can use it or not! It's your choice I don't care I like all your chapter anyway! :D

This is better, I guess, but I noticed something. After you fixed the paragraph problem, the descriptions disappeared :O Like the point of views of some characters, like in your previous chapters.\

One example is this in your chapter 1

Walked to the crowd and saw boys , being protected by guards while walking. The first one I saw had black hair, and seemed to be arrogant and lazy. The second one had dark violet hair and I think he had two horns sticking out of his head, he looked fearsome and a bad boy. the third one , how ever was a orange- haired boy who seemed to be always smiling, he seemed not that arrogant but , was just normal. The fourth-one was a kind looking gentleman who had pure blue hair, which all of the girls loved. The next one was a red haired martial artist who looked strong and sturdy. The last one looked uninterested in all the girls, he had white hair and ocean blue eyes .he looked expressionless.\

It's okay to have a paragraph like this, just don't mix up dialogues and descriptions, like this one in chapter 1 too:

I kept examining the white haired boy then he suddenly looked at me. Eye's filled with confusion, then after seconds he's lips lifted up to a smirk. I looked at him dumbfound , he just continued walking.i stared at him walking away then got pulled away by Elesis. "H-hey, that guy with the blue hair looked….cute." what? You mean elesis had a crush? " yeah, and, the orange one looked cute also." Lire said. You mean- "…and the one with the black hair looked interesting…" DID I JUST HEARD MARI SAID THAT! " ooooh and the one with the red hair looked perfect to me….." amy said smirking. " wait a minute, that demon boy looks sturdy enough to fight with!" someone said, " wh-what! L-ley?" I said shocked "Yo! So…who do you like Arme?" "wh-what? I don't like anyone ." "oh yeah? Y'know, the only one left is the albino guy…" Ley said teasingly. " I wont fall for a guy even after you beg me!" I said pouting.

Well, I'm going to start reading this when I got a chance in the laptop, since I'm playing GC in the Desktop and totally don't have time to read. :D

I hope I'll find this really interesting :)