I was the one who sent the mall thing but um still sorry but that is where his wife was bit
but wait I cant find chapter two have you not made it or am I just having problems

chuck was but not in the mall but yes this is good you should say in the willamate mall not just in willamate sorry just bothered me its good though

Like it so far. Just not lookin foreward to meeting otis. I like this concept

I like this concept. I would invest time to read it

I really enjoyed this and I can't wait to see what happens next :D

I'm super into this story. I'm excited to see what the next chapters have in hold! Poor Chuck, haha. He's scared of clowns. :(

Awesome story!

This is a great start so far man, I'm liking the concept of the story already. And If you haven't got OTR yet you should try it out it's a improvement to the original DR2. Anyways I look forward to this story bro keep it up

I have to say I am interested by this plot line, and your take on chuck and kate's relationship is off to a good start. Oh and you should play off the record, it will give you a new insite to chuck and it is a completely diffrant gaming experiance from dead riasing 2.

I love this story. I just hope this will become a game like "off

the record" dead rising game. Keep it up.