What happened to your other story? I totally forgot to review it! so sorry
anyway I really liked your other one - thought it highlighted how different sevadonn and Six were.
also thought that was exactly what sevadonn would do - very in character sorry again that forgot to review hope you put the story back up ;)

This is really good! This is kind of weird, but could you do one in Kyntak's POV as he finds/rescues Six and the baby?

good job. realy gives some insight into sevadonn

Nice story! It was really great seeing a fanfic written about a character we really don't see much of and shedding light of his thoughts and feelings. Well done, well written :) I enjoyed it - hope to see more fics from you in the Six of Hearts series :D