This... was amazing. Ever since Crossfire I've had this idea of Knock Out actually having a literal breakdown and crying and basically all that you've written here. Then, I hope, he will avenge Breakdown eventually. I really love this story and I would like to see if Knock Out and Dreadwing become close friends. I think it would be interesting. Anyways. I'll leave ya alone now. ;)

I love it! The reactions between the 2 mechs are beautiful as they understand what it's like to lose a loved one be it best friend or brother

This was amazing! One of the best post Breakdown stories I've read. You've captured Knockout's pain beautifully, and Dreadwing's want to comfort was fantastic. I loves this! I absolutely loved this! Well done.

:3 Love it... UPDATE..!

Whoa Poor Knock out. KIll Aracnia *mobs goes to her hide out*

Aracnia 0.0

Your ability to capture every character's personality is amazing. (Poor Knock Out! I feel so bad for him!)

I really enjoyed this story, and how you skirted the line of emotion and realism. The amount of detail and dialogue you wrote also gave this piece a particular air of professionalism, something that's difficult to achieve. :) Great job! I hope to read more of your work soon!

snif' ...so sad... but very well written! u captured both of those charactors perfectly! ...i miss breakdown...

Sad and beautiful! I especially liked how you choose Dreadwing to do the comforting. That's something I can actually see. He shares similar kind of pain (because of losing his brother) and he also has a reason to feel responsible over what happened even though it wasn't his fault.

I do hope they are going to make KO and the rest to acknowledge what happened in the actual show. For now it seems like Megatron is the only one who cares (somewhat at least) cause he sounded pretty pissed when Breakdown's remains were left behind.

Wow. I have read many fictions in tribute to Breakdown's death. This one really got to me. I think the understanding of Dreadwing. You wrote like you know the loss and grief of loosing a loved one. I am definitely faving this.

I like this story, your characterisations are perfect for both characters. I am going to be adding this to my favourites.

Jumana

Interesting interaction, I liked how Dreadwing was genuinely sorry and concerned about Knock Out.

Very sad. But in a Decepticon-esque way. My favorite line is:

-Dreadwing replied quietly, "Because I know of your pain; I have felt a similar ache myself. Because I had stood at the edge of the very same abyss as you do now, with no one to keep me from falling in. And because you deserve to live to reap your vengeance."-

Because the Autobots would say something about forgiveness and forgetting or whatever. Decepticons live to avenge, basically. Okay. Pro-Decepticon rant is done now. Great job!

Out of all the "Knockout Finds Out" fics that have been posted here since that faithful Saturday, THIS is the best in my opinion. You can really feel his emotions in this. I might actually cry. Poor Breakdown and Knockout...I really do hope they show SOME sort of reaction to his death in the series.