I loved it how you portrayed Thomas here. You have shown in this story that he really does have a heart. Great job :)

Interesting ending there... I loved his speech about the Black Swan of Nina and I was quite surprised to see him leave. Great twist! Well done :)

I haven't mentioned that I loathe Thomas, right? Well, you know now. He really is the worst type of choreographer a ballet company can ask for. But, this story showe a different side to him. It proves he does have a heart. I really can't say much more, because I can't criticise perfection. His description of Nina being torn between the Black swan and the White swan was exquisite. Amazing job.

Hugs,

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