Awwwws I just LUV it ...just LUV it... I loved how came didn't freak out that much when she found Marshall in bed with Fionna...

I LUVED IT MAN or GIRL!

i loved it! i think your descriptions of the characters were perfect! its really hard to find a really good fiolee fanfic but yours is great! please make more! (P.S I loved marshall lee in this one!) :DD

Cute story. I liked it :)

noooo i must have moar! D:

loved it. simply loved it

awwww- awwwww- awwwwwwwwwwww :""""""""""
THAT WAS THE CUTEST FIONNA MARSHALL LEE FIC I'VE READ 3333333

Oh my gosh, your story just made me cry. That was insanely good, I can't believe how amazing that was. Thank you so much for writing and sharing such an awesome piece of art.

/let me love you with the power of my feels

You should set the story five years later and have fionna Marry Marshall and have 2 full human kids and have Marshall explain how he became a vampire and have a journey through fionna's pregnancy after she realizes they are having twins and have Marshall add a room to the tree home and soon propose to fionna and then add a happy ending yay

Awww that was so sweet!

I Love your story so much!

It was a great story and I loved it but it feels like there should be more to the story than just that endin so I would love it of you could write more

I want more. Make their relationship blossom and such! You are a great writer.

I am a Fiolee critique and I find this story cute and adorable. Nice job!

Oh my god! I read this in my phone cuz i'm in clases but this is one of the best oneshots I've evr read! I completely love it w

Nice job, I really liked it!