MORE! This is awesome! Update soon!

XD yep I love that timing anyway thanks for answering and keep it up (if there's more)

Well I love your storie... You keep Nny in character very well. Um questions for Nny...

How old are you

What was the funniest thing nail bunny said

Where's Squee?

i love it i cant wait to see were it goes

I really like your portrayal of Nny.

That "wacky" reaction- perfect.

I really like where this story is going. The unique plot, the gore, the flashbacks- all are things I love about this story. Keep up the great work :) Oh, I have a question for Nny: How's Squeegee doing?

It's "torture" not "torcher".

Thanks for the update.

No reviews? I thought you'd have loads! This is a very interesting idea, and the first i've read on the topic. Although I have to say Johnny was pretty ooc in this. Chapter. He hates people. With a passion. Especially Edlyn. He'd probable be more likely to hang her from the ceiling with chains or something until she cracked...there were also a few grammar errors that interrupted the flow of the story a bit. However, other than that it is really good! I'm wondering if Edlyn is going to start reflecting more? Maybe with a flash back or something that could show us more how Johnny had changed? Either way, good job, you have a story thats mostly free of grammar errors that centers around a unique and interesting idea :)

Ooh I am intrigued! There's a few little grammar mistakes but the writing is still good and fun to read. I can't wait to see your take on this girl and what happened! :D