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| Reviews for The Weepingbell |
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   Lacho99 10/12/12 . chapter 10CONTINUE IT NOW! |
| Rook1e 9/26/12 . chapter 10 YAY More! More! and check your grammar... you missed words. |
| fidofia 9/20/12 . chapter 9 Haha, nice chapter, definitely improving in quality! I'd just like to point out that like rookie, you seem to be leaving out apostrophes in display of ownership. It would be " portia's" if she owned the thing you were talking about. Really like the description of this chapter, but to make it more interesting and readable, you could maybe use paragraphs between different subjects to cut the chapter into interesting, descriptive segments. Good work, keep it up |
| Rook1e 9/20/12 . chapter 9 Fantastic, also I'm loving the personal jokes in there... continue :) |
| Rook1e 9/19/12 . chapter 7 YYYYYYYAAAAAAYYYYYYY! STILL TOO SHORT! but good :) |
| Rook1e 9/17/12 . chapter 6 LONGER CHAPTERS oh and I may not be able to update my story since I am busy with homework :/ |
| DarkKryptid 9/14/12 . chapter 5 Did you copy me? U know. How in my fanfic Steve Portia/Otitis parents tried to swim in lava? CAUSE THEIR MIGHTY SIMILAR! |
| SwordsOfEternalLight 9/13/12 . chapter 2 Isn't Weepingbell a Pokemon? |
| Rook1e 9/13/12 . chapter 5 Wow this was a really short chapter, WRITE MORE, oh the the dialog was a little bit confusing but other then that, good :) |
| Rook1e 8/29/12 . chapter 4 Awkward since Otitis and Rookie are the same person :) Anyways keep on writing. I'm busting to know what happens and what I'm like :) Also you better add Jess/Fidofia in soon, she's chucking a spaz XD |
| HiragiHaru 8/5/12 . chapter 3 Nice. Are you going to write more? |
| Rook1e 4/30/12 . chapter 3 Yeah, thats right go see Rookie... she's smart and she'll know what to do with you XD |
| chernobylvictim302 4/22/12 . chapter 3 Interesting concept, can't wait to read more. |
