yo i'm just a guest but i got two ideas for you set it up to where while balderdash was trying to court primrose he had a one night stand with a unicorn show mare who is trixie's great mother and she never knew who the father was because the jerk took her to a party and got the mare drunk and made it look like she slept with several colt and stallions but balderdash got her instead while doing another unicorn mare who's flim and flam's great grandmother and she still blaims mister smith because her balderdash is gone hence the reason why they tryed to run the appled family out of ponyville and failed.

Oh, quite nice. :) I love how you keep jumping about in time, giving us snippets of the importance of past events to our modern cast. And Strawberry as the pony responsible for Lyra's fabled human obsession, and the Dr. Horrible tie-in... .

Wait a second, Balderdash became Bad Horse? AHAHA I LOVE YOU SO MUCH RIGHT NOW.

you must write moar D:

any ETA on your next chapter?

This story is awesome. I'm not helping much with that kind of review, I know, but I don't think you need help. You're doing brilliantly!

I hope Strawberry and Mr. Smith can vindicate themselves...this is a pretty bad spot they're in...

Oh yeah, and this Cult seems to work rather well with the "Cupcakes" thing. Not that I have read it or plan on reading it, but it was just a side thought.

Uh-oh, those two are in deep trouble now... "Meat Pies", that won't end well...

I absolutely ADORE this story! It's just so great :) please please please continue! It would make my life complete

Ahhhhh ok now it makes more sense.

I was just a little confused because you didn't specify when it was set in the first chapter, hence the comments of The Mane Six.

*Checks chapter 1 again*

-_- Either that or I'm a retard and didn't check the dates.

Stupid Happy! I sure hope this whole spy mess is cleared up soon.

I laughed so hard at the stair scene. Imagining big horses like that tumbling around is just too funny.

It would be awesome to have some kind of relative to Spike in the story(Spike's best pony-err-dragon!).

I hope Balderdash gets what's coming to him for cheating the boys out of their money like that. Which I'm assuming he does considering the Pies eventually own the farm.

This is such an interesting concept, and you have executed it really well. Never in a million years would I think of something like this!

Reading about their knowledge of things picked up from humans makes me wonder how much my own pets know xD.

You writing style reminds me a lot of Hitchhikers Guide to The Galaxy for some reason.

Ha! I find it extremely funny that they think he has an invisible cutie mark. Also, the stairs scene amused me to no end. I can just imagine full-grown horses edging down those teeny pony-sized steps (mostly because I know of a certain set of stairs that makes me feel as though I was the horse in that situation)...

Well this fic is very very interesting. I love just how their just bumbling along and such. Though the whole invisible cutiemark was a stroke of genius. I wonder since there not from that dimension would they live longer then the other ponies, Such as what happened to the doctor though it was only 3 days for him which was 100 or so years after. Would the opposite apply to the horses?

nice story, but later on i think the charechters should meet the main six. still a good story.

Well they're busted

Anyway still have no clue if The Mane Six exist in this story (unless you are taking a different approach and are just using the normal cast as cameos).