Though I applaud Kuro Rakka Shimo for creating the perfect theme song, I think that a song that already exists would've been pretty cool too. Have you heard the song, "In My World" by ROOKiEZ is PUNK'D? If not, I would definitely recommend that you listen to it. It totally fits the story. Anyway song preferences aside, this is the best fanfic I've had the liberty of reading on my PS3! Keep up the good work. Trust me, you're gonna go places,my friend!
L8tr days!
Jace Seville

hey nice story. loved it. i do have to admit the end was great but the fight could have gone longer but other wise great. the confrontation between Alvin and his father was a little dull, cause i thought it would have taken both of Alvin's brother to get him off before trying to kill him for all the BS he put his sons through. overall great story, one i would read again. I'll diffidently will be reading the sequel.

(When it is in capitals that means it is to be empathize with volume)
I LOVE THIS STORY it is one of the better ones I have read on this site although I'm sorry to say that one comes in second to another Alvin and Brittany story but that has to do with the kissing scenes and the tension between Alvin and Brittany that hold you to your seat so to speak (seeing as I'm lying down) anyways that battle scene was EPIC and can't wait for more so until my next review may any and all writers blocks be crush under foot and then killed with fire
P.s. what happened to Alvin's guns and I think Alvin need to use his ability to make Brittany weak in the knee more often to build up tension which then can be released in ether anger or passion maybe both just to be safe lol I always seem to leave the longest reviews lol

Nicee :3

I gotta admit this chapter inspired me to add the song to my fanfic, AATC Songbook. Feel free to peruse it and find the song there.

I am so thanking the Lord the you were born for I have never read anything like this...

so happy there's a sequel!

BEST chapter ever read!

u are a HECK of a genius!

IM A BANANA!

I LUB IT...

I really should'lve red this story :)

Well, I'm glad I read this, even if you've already started the sequel. I had my doubts when I first started, but this was really good! I'm going to go start reading the sequel right now!

this story was AMAZING! very intense. can't wait until the sequel!

-Reish

YYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYY! A sequel! It'll be as good as the first!

Its over? -Starts crying- NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! -stops- oh yeah, theres a sequel. -akward silence-Well, this is akward.

that was awesome! i'm glad there's a sequel on the way, otherwise i'd be like a Hell Hound in my frustration XD but as always, i'll be here for your need of new demon species if you wish.

A brilliant ending for a truly EPIC story! Braaaaaavo! Raining confetti for yoooouuuuu!