this a good story I never knew that greg had a younger sibling

cool story...i guess

ahhhh poor you. Sorry didnt mean it in a mean way :)

ahhh didnt know rodrick was so soft wish he was my big brother lol!

huh how dus the teacher no wats wrong?Still good though

cool im liking it so far

cool this is the first fan fiction i've ever read and it looks good so far!By the way is your real name Amber?

I think she did the right Idea to leave him he
Is a backstabbing cheater

. THIS IS TOO CLIFFY.

Hmm, so she ran away. I wonder what happens next

I love the last line. Bryce is so gonna get it

Is Greg in high school?

This is funny!
"This is what your brain will look like if you watch too much TV"
So following this story

This story keeps my interest, but I do have a few questions. Accordidng to Amber she is shy and social. Isn't that contradicting herself? How does Cerial get cold? Amber was feeding Manny the cerial wouldn't Manny get sick too? In the books, Greg is 11-13 years old. If she was dating Bryce for 3 years she would be somewhere between 8-10 years old when they started dating. Isn't that a little young to have a boyfriend? Why is she taking care of everyone if she has two older siblings? What was the point of putting that glee song in there? It didn't advance the plot. How did she sing so well if she's crying?I like the plot and how you wrote Greg, Manny, and Rodrick and their family relationships with Amber :) just be careful not to make Amber a Mary sue. Good luck. Update soon. :D

wow keep writing this story and keep it cool