|Reviews for The reporter and the pirate|
| Kara Green 6/18/12 . chapter 1
You were right, I did enjoy this! :)
It's such an unusual pairing, I never would have thought of it, yet it's so well written :) I love how the emotion shines through the whole way through :) I love it!
| FemaleSpock 4/6/12 . chapter 1
I hope you don't mind, but I'm going to give you a some con-crit. The formatting of this fic is majorly off for some reason- it's all on one side of the page and it makes it a little difficult to read- the fact that there aren't full spaces between paragraphs also contributes to this (what software do you use to write your fics?). There are also several spelling errors- interview being written as 'interwiew' being the one that stuck out to me most obviously- a spell check could easily weed such things out. This might be a bit of a strange suggestion, but I've noticed that you tend to write really long fics, perhaps if you made them a little bit shorter you could focus on really getting the essentials of the story down in a really great writing style.
You have some really interesting ideas- Callie/Sonny is certainly a rare-pair in this fandom and one that has potential- it makes sense that she would be curious about him and that Sonny would fall for an intelligent, confident woman like her. I also liked that you referred back to Sonny's past- particularly to his dead wife- because I think that would naturally be really important to any new relationship he would form- I also like that you mention D'jok and the place that he has in his father's life as well. It's because you have good ideas that it seems a bit of a shame that people will be put off reading because of technical issues. I hope that my suggestions were helpful and not too bossy or anything. If you ever need a beta for a fic, then feel free to ask me!