This is real good, I want to know what happens next, but I liked how you ended it. He just laughed. I enjoyed Izaya's thoughts and that Shizuo heard what Izaya said near the end.

Dear god. I swear, you MUST continue this. I really liked the plot, and the way you described Izaya's feelings, I felt I could understand what he felt like... I really want to know what happens next and what he'll decide... ; u ; pwease continue if you can?

Interesting! Shizuo can be sneaky if he wants to be! I actually want to see what Izaya decides. I know he's torn, but he has kinda already let the proverbial cat out of the bag and all.