wow! thats all i have to say about this poem, its astounding, i found myself enthralled and enchanted by the description and tone that captured suzies anguish and contemtment. you have a talent and i suggest you pursue it! the story all placed in a delightful poem that opens the mind to the sorrow and misery buried beneath. poetry like this brings people together. good luck :)

Wow just wow that was a very good poem you are very good!:D

Hey if you read the book, he never kept her in a safe in his basement, he threw her in the sinkhole before Lindsey found the page. But this is a really good poem, but maybe you should expand your vocabulary a little.

I love the contrast of the beginning and end you've put together... His face is the last she sees and hopefully hers will be the last he sees.

I like it !

OMG! THAT WAS AMAZING! I wish I could write like you!