|Reviews for embedded forever in your memory|
| berryshortcake 12/6/12 . chapter 1
wow! thats all i have to say about this poem, its astounding, i found myself enthralled and enchanted by the description and tone that captured suzies anguish and contemtment. you have a talent and i suggest you pursue it! the story all placed in a delightful poem that opens the mind to the sorrow and misery buried beneath. poetry like this brings people together. good luck :)
| Guest 9/1/12 . chapter 1
Wow just wow that was a very good poem you are very good!:D
| Chills 8/5/12 . chapter 1
Hey if you read the book, he never kept her in a safe in his basement, he threw her in the sinkhole before Lindsey found the page. But this is a really good poem, but maybe you should expand your vocabulary a little.
| teabags 7/12/12 . chapter 1
I love the contrast of the beginning and end you've put together... His face is the last she sees and hopefully hers will be the last he sees.
I like it !
| Jess 5/16/12 . chapter 1
OMG! THAT WAS AMAZING! I wish I could write like you!