I must keep reading this! please update soon!

finally an update!

Oh my goshh! You finally updated! Yay! Well, great job on the chapter. The first part flowed really well until you got to the last section (the Matoba section) I don't know why but it just seems...hmm, it fits yet it's...it just has a weird feeling. I don't really know how to put it. Besides that, awesome job and I really really can't wait for the next chapter!

Well, this seems a bit interesting.

you know there a sooo soooo soooooooooooo few of this pairing fic made that it suck! it suck to know that a good potential such as this pairing is not apprieciated...looking at this pairing...if only you would continue this fic it would definitely will be awesome... this pairing need more exposure...really..

Quite a disappointment that its only 1 chap.;-(
oh,and i luv yaoi

You should continue this :P
It's pretty good and the idea has a lot of potential. I kinda hope it stays clean, but that might be a bit much to ask for...

MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!

so far so good. it's truly well-written and got me intrested. looking forward to reading more! :)

This is really good, are you going to change the rating for future chapters? *hint hint*

oooooohhh this is interesting I'll wait for the next chapter :D

ciao! INTERESTING! Is these another technique done by Matoba to get Natsume into his clan or is it genuine cause? Wow, I can't wait to read what happen next! But seriously, Natsume needs to choose who to help carefully.. :0 Deshou? :D But his generosity makes him interesting and the story heart-warming

I hope this will be a heart-warming story...