*blinkblink*

You know, the writing's not all that bad, but sorry to break it to you, this is what we call a Mary Sue. You haven't described her to death-and I thank God for that-and that's a major trait of Mary Sue's. Just keep it as you are and you're fine.

Right... this has real potential, please just don't make her seduce anybody or make her invincible or something... *wince* and you're set. Well, mata aimasho..

wingnut: One reviewer? Ack!

Minerva: o.O

Arianrod: *stares* And I thought the number of reviews *she* got was bad...

wingnut: *glares* Anyway, it's good! Please continue!

wingnut: Sounds wonderful! Please get the first chapter up as soon as possible!

Minerva: Really enjoyed it… and wingnut, don't you DARE say anything!

wingnut: I wasn't gonna say nothing!

Minerva: Sure…