Well, I really liked the beginning of your story. You made a very good job, although it is your first story, you described the feelings so that everybody can understand what Jordan and Angela are feeling.

Really good!

I really enjoyed your story! So sweet! And this is your first fan fic. Wow you seriouly did looking foward to reading the next chapters!

I really like this story so far. keep it up!

I liked this, nice chemistry between Angela and Jordan. My favourite part was when he blushed at the end. Hope you keep going!