I was hesitant to read your fanfic because I don't like Jordan being dead...but that being said it was well written albeit dark.

The big challenge I see for you is that you've built a Jordan/Ang drama and Jordan has been gone for chapter 1 and now that he is buried I am just not sure where you can go with it. THere is always more flashbacks but as readers I know he is dead, how he died - so I am not sure where you can take this.

But again it was well written

Wow this is really really sad. You are making Angela walk the fine line between bereavement and major depression, I hope that she starts to see a bit more "light" soon!

really enjoyed this want to know what happens next still sad that jordans gone :P