Hi!

Well, I enjoyed this story, it was... cute '

To my mind, Daiba appears maybe too young (I imagine he is more rebel and always angry, and it's strange for me that he is so nervous about alcohol). But perhaps it is because I'm twice his age... On the other hand, Harlock doesn't seem to be OOC (you can be reassured ). Sure, he can say things like that: "drink alcohol, you'll be a man" or "be free, be rebel" or also "oops, I forgot strong alcohol could be bad for young children, the doctor will again scold me"...

By the way, it's fun to have new interpretations of the characters.

I hope you will continue to write and have many ideas of Harlock stories!

A.

(and sorry if my english is weird. Too lazy to check in dictionnary)