I really like this story a lot and you're both really awesome writers. It's good to finally start seeing more well-written Orphan fanfic. Please continue this story!

Another excellent chapter of this story! We are getting some great insight into Leena's beginnings. I can't wait to see where this is going. Please don't make us wait too long :)

Haha, now this made me laugh XD made my day.

nice start, and im sure that the collaboration between you and F.A. D'Laurentis will make this story great!:)

A wonderful first chapter! You write very well. Keep the chapters coming! I look forward to reading many more of them.

I absolutely love your story! You really have a gift with writing, Linda! I can't wait for the next chapter! XD