This story was great, it just didn't feel like it was finished. When was someday soon?

All characters seem very in character for me, especially H&M.

Great story with believable Harm/Mac interaction :)

This story was so good :) It didn't seem very OOC at all. I definitely cracked up several times!

i absolutely love this story and have read it a hundred times.i love all your stories for JAG awsome job i hope you finish this story i cant wait to read it

great story.

This is great- and I don't reckon it's way out of character either.

MUST WRITE SEQUEL! Please! I am so not above begging if there's a chance to get a continuation of a great story like this. What happens when they wake up? Please, oh please, write more.

P.S. Read your profile. Many of the same obsessions. Liked your couple of LOTR stories as well.

Ha. VERY good so far! "Barbie" part was HILARIOUS! (especially that AN about Janice..in real life she sounds SO different!) Great job!

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Lovely. Very fun! Well done.

Wonderful story and who cares about "out of character"? I've read all your JAG fanfiction and love them all...it'd be great if you could write more. You have excellent style.

i know it's a old story...but one more chapter? please!

this was really cute. and i *especially* liked the way you handled the meeting between Sergi and Trish. i always wished JAG would have kept Sergi there and go deeper into the relationships. i've missed the human part of JAG.

I know this is an old story - but it's beautiful and I wish you would write more - I would love to see a sequel to this and what happens after Harm and Mac woke up like that. Hope you'll see this review some time

perfect angelic little devils! I love that line!

I love this story! i've read all your storys and this one deserves a sequal. i love your storys and i have even booked marked your sight please email me