I haven't read it yet I bet it's going to be good I love the movie orphan so if u agree with this idea here it is to make a good twin of esther and let them fight over max

Please, please, please, please continue writing this! This is soooo good so far, I love it!

I love your story! please continue!

Not bad, keep it up!

I love this story, I hope you'll continue it, the idea is really good

What an interesting concept indeed! I'm eager to find out what will happen when "Esther" retrieves more of her memory or whether she'll even become aware of her true age. Keep writing!