Great chapter!

Interesting start! I like the way you tweaked Hermione's upbringing. Being raised by Mary is a very interesting approach! I look forward to the next chapter.

WooHoo! This was a fantastic second chapter! First good news that Hermione now knows about her being in alternate dimension and HOLY SHIT with her new de-aged body! Oh, Gabriel! He surely is a twisted genus! Poor Hermione though, it’s gotta suck to have to go through puberty again :( I wonder what Hermione’s reaction will be to finding out her father is still alive with two brothers she didn’t have before in this new dimension? Plus the news that her mother is dead there too? I wonder if she’ll want to try to form a relationship with them?

I loved the coincidence of Hermione being in the same hospital as hunters, and hunters who had a demon after them at that exact moment :-) All Gabriel’s work maybe?

I wonder if Mr. Elkins will be contacting John about Hermione? Also is this after his and John’s broken “partnership”?

So the two John Doe’s found dead with Hermione were Adrian and Marcus? If so, it does make sense with Gabriel’s character and all...

Great idea with Hermione calling psychokinesis for her gifts, it would still make hunters suspicious of her and her powers, but not as much as calling herself a witch would. I do wonder if Hermione will ever be able to use her magic fully again? I don’t know how she would be able to get a wand in her new dimension. Maybe she could make one? Or maybe she could eventually teach herself wandless magic?

Anyway, thanks for the super fast second chapter – it was brilliant like the first and definitely has me curious for more! I loving the continuing twists and I look forward to reading your third chapter whenever you update! Thanks again!

Gabriel de-aged her? Oh boy.

I feel bad for Hermione for having to go through puberty and all that fun stuff all over again. But I imagine the Winchesters will be a lot more likely to accept her in the form of an eight-year-old than her actual age at present.

And hopefully one of those hunters will be able to call John and tell him about Hermione so she doesn't end up in foster care or something.

This should surprise Hermione quite a lot (John Winchester & sons, but no Mary W) - Too bad she doesn't have her wand. I don't recall what its core was, but they're usually some animal that is probably unobtainable in this dimension. Still -occlumency/legilimens, PK, all that. She might be able to apparate. From what I recall, that didn't need a wand to do it.

Hm. Potions! If she can get the ingredients, there are quite a few she could make. Hey. The 2 dead guys that came across with her. One of their wands might be usable by her...

I can't wait to find out next though I'm sorry to hear about your computer because I was hoping to find out about the continuous of some of the stories, namely the Misstep (Hermione/Kakashi pairing) and another one, Hermione/Itachi pairing, kind of forgot the title is, I was really hoping to find out what happen next.

I do hope that you will have the inspiration to continue those amazing stories and I'm willing to wait as long as you could update those stories.

Keep up the good work.

INteresting idea and you covered basically all the weak points that could arise in a crossover. I am not completely certain about Hermione being related to the Winchesters but I am willing to see where you go with it.

I always like your Hermione... Good to have you back !

I'm sorry about your computer. Happened to me twice, and I screamed my head off. Now I have three safes : CD, external disk, and usb key !

KYAA! I can hardly wait for the next chappy!

This is a very interesting story so far...who is Mini-Jack?

Well damn! This is seriously fascinating! The whole idea is like crazy unique and I’m soooo looking forward to seeing how you bring Stargate into it. Plus Hermione/Mini-Jack pairing? Freaking AWESOME! LoL.

I also *love* the idea of Hermione being from a different dimension than the Supernatural world/Stargate world, and of course the twist with Hermione being Mary and John’s daughter... That’s one hell of a twist that’s for sure :-) I wonder what Gabriel (I adore you for using him!) has in store for our favorite witch? With her being in a hospital and using the Winchester name to the cops will Papa Winchester being hearing about her? And if so, what will his reaction be and what will he decided to do? Dean and Sam as well? John will probably think she’s lying and evil :( Plus her being a witch is sure to cause problems with the Hunter Winchesters. I am kinda curious to know what John (and Dean and Sam) reactions would be if they ever find out that Mary is/was alive in Hermione’s world as well?

I also wonder when Hermione will figure out she’s not in her dimension anymore? And what did Gabriel do to Adrian and Marcus?

Anyhoo, I enjoyed the hell out of this first chapter and I’m definitely looking forward to reading more! I also want to add that it’s good to see you updating again, I miss your writing - I love all your stories (especially your Hermione/Naruto ones and your Dawn/Supernatural one). Sucks about your computer dying though :( I hope your inspiration comes back!

Hermione as an alt!Winchester raised by Mary is all kinds of awesome. Can't wait to see what she ends up doing now that she's quite possibly stranded in SPN!verse.

Love the idea that wizards/witches of HP!verse are nephilim with full access to their powers.

I'm insanely curious about what Gabriel has in store for Hermione.

Will the hospital (attempt to) track down John Winchester? That could get all kinds of awkward if they actually succeed. I can only imagine how Hermione would react to Alive!John.

interesting! keep but could you please finish "Paradoxicality"!

So... Hermione is from a reality where Mary survived, John didn't... and now she's in the SPN - verse? Her claiming John W. as her father triggers something & Dean & Sam notice?