great storyline but may want to alter spelling! xx

Okay so I am particularly fond of your writing, I have seen some mistakes but those are irrelevant, your soooo much better than I. Tho I can't write I can come up with great idea's for your story if you'll let me. Please send me an email at . I think that it should turn out that Scott came over to gain trust by faking an apology but later on should drug her up and try to get into her pants, but like I said that should come later. This time while he shows up at her door it should turn out that the creepy teacher in the beginning of the story is Scott's father and has kicked him out of his house because he didn't have sex with her, meanwhile he has come there asking for a place to stay and another go,that might take time, to get into get pants.

Okay so I am particularly fond of your writing, I have seen some mistakes but those are irrelevant, your soooo much better than I. Tho I can't write I can come up with great idea's for your story if you'll let me. Please send me an email at . I think that it should turn out that Scott came over to gain trust by faking an apology but later on should drug her up and try to get into her pants, but like I said that should come later. This time while he shows up at her door it should turn out that the creepy teacher in the beginning of the story is Scott's father and has kicked him out of his house because he didn't have sex with her, meanwhile he has come there asking for a place to stay and another go,that might take time, to get into get pants. I love this it's amazing I hope you will write more, soon. The earlier review was from me but I just made a account so I could also write fan fic and follow you and your stories.

OMG! U NEED TO KEEP ON WRITING! THIS LEFT ME HANGING! PLZ KEEP WRITING MORE. I NEED TO NOW WUT HAPPENS NEXT. I JUS READ THE STORY TODAY BUT JUS TOTS FELL IN LOVE WIT IT. IF U ALREADY WROTE MORE PLZ TELL ME WHERE TO READ SOME OF THIS STORY! XD

Amazing story. Keep writing please!:-)

I like it, that was nice what Devon did.

Holy crap! Can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon, this was amazing. Poor Katherine. xD Still love Devon, though. :)
Alee V.

I have to admit I'm starting to like this story! It is very intresting I originally came to read a Bryn and chase story but you know I like this better! Keep up the good work!

I like it. I always did like Devon...

. ! One thing I want to know/ask: is there going to be more? And if there isn't, then please WRITE ON! I agree with practically everyone else, creepy teacher at the start... The even creepier thing is I can actually imagine a teacher like that... O.O xD anyway LOVE this story! :D

I LOVE how protective Devon is of Katherine! :D I can't wait to read the next chapter. Plus, those guys are such pervs! I would turn around and punch them if i was her! :D

This was great! You have a talent for normalcy, I've noticed in this story. :) That's a good thing, since sometimes writers get a little too into the magic-creepy-evil-stalker-with-powers-stalking-the -heroine kind of thing. I do that too sometimes. ;)

Update soon!

Alee V.

Wow, this story is amazing! There never used to be that many Raised By Wolves Fanfics, so I'm glad I found one that's so well written! And one about Devon! Well, I hope you update soon! Keep up the great work!

Alee V.

has a great start, i thought the teacher was major creepy though. cant wait to see how the plotline progreses