TWO DOWN! I can't wait to read the third one. I loved how you redid the scene where Peter asks Ray if he's been sleeping with the slime. I never even thought about that look Ray and Egon gave each other could mean Egon was the guilty one! Hilarious! I really hope you write even more of these. I'm afraid I'll run out soon.

Who ya gonna call?

Dana and Peter are gettin' hitched! WOOT! More, please ;)

Please continue soon! Love it!

Woohoo! You are on a roll, girl! Keep it up! And here you were saying you probably weren't going to post for a while...I must say, I was pleasently surprised.

Loving this. I was especially intrigued by Jennifer's mother showing up...totally not expecting that! Nice twist :D

Really excited to see what happens next!

Hey, nice job! Still really need to work on those missing words, though ;)

Excited for the next chapter!