This has a very good, promising start, I really hope you update soon!

How did I miss this one? Another good job on the writing. This should be very interesting.

Well written and a great idea for a story. Can't wait to see where you go with it as you are quite good!

Excellent start - hope you'll be updating.

Very nice - enjoyed reading it. Lovely interaction with all the characters, including the Murtaugh family. I always thought the relationship with the whole family, not just Roger was such a great part of the series and you show it nicely. And a wonderfully delicious plotline that should prove to be quite exciting. :)

Nice start to your story. You are spot on when it comes to the Riggs/Murtaugh relationship and it makes this a joy to read. Looking forward to more chapters.