VERY well written! It sounds very convincing and in-character. I must also appreciate way you send out humour in your story without any apparent effort! Great work in all.

"visiting a distant cousin of my aunt's nephew" was hilarious.

nice

Haha, this was a nice, cute one-shot. I was really curious why both of them were at the bus stop, so you did a good job building up that suspense, and the explanations both made sense. I particularly loved the sentences "Remus wanted to have a family. He wanted to buy nappies for his children" because that brief characterization of Remus just seemed so perfect to me. Quick typo-catching: "At least he reached the bus stop. Few people " should be "At last he reached the bus stop. A few people".

Anyway, interesting one-shot.

haha! hilarity alert! :)

hahahahahhaa awesomee storyy! i loved ittt! poor moony having to put up with those puppy eyes!