|Reviews for Moony? What are you doing here?|
| Arish Mudra Rakshas 8/8/12 . chapter 1
VERY well written! It sounds very convincing and in-character. I must also appreciate way you send out humour in your story without any apparent effort! Great work in all.
| yay 7/12/12 . chapter 1
"visiting a distant cousin of my aunt's nephew" was hilarious.
| roseandfudge 7/9/12 . chapter 1
| Jemennuie 7/8/12 . chapter 1
Haha, this was a nice, cute one-shot. I was really curious why both of them were at the bus stop, so you did a good job building up that suspense, and the explanations both made sense. I particularly loved the sentences "Remus wanted to have a family. He wanted to buy nappies for his children" because that brief characterization of Remus just seemed so perfect to me. Quick typo-catching: "At least he reached the bus stop. Few people " should be "At last he reached the bus stop. A few people".
Anyway, interesting one-shot.
| JilyEvotter19 6/6/12 . chapter 1
haha! hilarity alert! :)
| Go TeAm BeLiKoV w 4/28/12 . chapter 1
hahahahahhaa awesomee storyy! i loved ittt! poor moony having to put up with those puppy eyes!