|Reviews for Phone home|
| Rodent2000XD 5/22/13 . chapter 1
You're written 275 different fanfictions?!
| Outasync 6/12/12 . chapter 1
Yes, this is the only way I could see Jonathan and Maddy ever using the 'L-word' to each other. So casual, not realising what they've said until it's said.
Just been re-watching the very first episode, where Jonathan gets all upset that Maddy has a boyfriend after she explicitly told him that she was not interested in him "in a way that made it seem like you were interested in me". They had their most heartfelt conversation over the phone in that episode - or at least Maddy did, before she realised that the phone had come unplugged half-way through her rant/confession.
The super-awkward romance between them only works as long as they don't act on it. Your story brings them together, while at the same time keeping them miles apart (literally). Great stuff. You have their voices down pat, too. I can just hear the actors reading this.