Yes, I remember that Cheryl Cole was the celebrity

I remember this story. it was good.

Lily and liam arnt related so how comz uve put them together but i gess u can do wat u want in a fanfic and its good anyway so CEEP IT UP!

Good punctation

however, would this really happen?

1) they wouldn't leave one social worker in charge especially tracy...

2) It would have to be very very cold to get hyperthermia

3) They wouldn't let Tee and lily be fostered let alone 6 hours away

4) Liam would of found out a lot earlier

You left it a bit weirdly how suddenly they didn't foster anyone...

Hi! I've decided that my next story will be about Liam's life before and in the Dumping Ground. It will be a hurt/comfort genre. These are some of the things it'll include:

- How Liam and Lily were dumped

- Life when Liam was in Burnywood

- How he found out that Lily was his sister

- His life at school

- All of his injures (he will have lots)

- His foster parents

- Life at the Dumping Ground

Also, it will include his most inner feelings and include some of his secrets! Here is a bit of the first chapter. If you like it, just say so in your review or PM me!

It was August 1st 1998. Mrs O'Donovan was wrapping up her newborn baby boy. She had called him Liam. She was running away with her boyfriend. She would leave Lily as well.

Liam and Lily were found a few hours later. Social services had come to put them into care. They were separated.

10 years later

"Mum! Stop it!" Ten year old Liam shouted. His mum, Kate, was beating him up for no reason. He was crying in pain and had been ever since. Liam was really thin as he wasn't being fed. Just then, there was a knock on the door. It was social services and Liam was off to Burnywood...

Like it? Remember, this is only an extract. The real thing will be much longer.

Youre a fucking idiot you ass hole. If you went to preschool or were a soulless ginger, I wouldn't be surprised.

Hi! I didn't finish the authors note properly, is one of my two best friends at school. If you need any ideas on a storyline, if you want to submit a character, or if you want to suggest something, just PM me, or leave a review, even if its anonymous.

Thank You

Leigh-Anne xx

you copied my plot line *sobs*

BTW, dracomalfoyismine is one of my best friends school

Thanks for using my character! Btw, if you need any ideas, just PM me and I'd be happy to help. Thank you SOOOOO much!

LozzipopBabyXxX

omfg ppoor liam

age 15

name rose

how did she get in hospital she was hit by her dad

looks. long stright blonde hair with blue streaks a bit shorter then liam

personallity caring scared of adults beacue of her dad kind but if you get on the bad side of her she will kick your arse

hi its sal omfg well u did learrn something from biology..

This is great! If you use my character, it will mean the world to me.

Name: Sam (Samantha) Biggs

Age: 19

Appearance: straightened, messy dark hair tied back in a ponytail, blue eyes and lots of spots. Wearing a nightdress with Jeans shoved on under them.

Why are they in hospital?: fell down the stairs one night, while going to get a drink. Broken her arm. She says her younger sister, Chloe (who Liam might have a crush one, if you decide to take it that route), pushed her, but the doctors just think she's delusional and doesn't want to admit her mistake.

Personality: she is fiery and answers back a lot, and is not afraid to fight for what she wants, even with a broken arm. She never stops talking...

Please pick her! :)

I love this fic! Please keep going and UPDATE SOON! :D

I would like to thank Lady-of-da-Lightning for Dan in Liam's nightmare, Skye for the advice, luna-nina for the reviews and Steph. Also, I would like to thank Rory's greatest fan for all of the shout outs she gave me! I will not be updating on Thursday because I am going out, Friday because I have got a wedding and I don't know about the weekend. I will update on schooldays apart from Thursdays because I have to see my friends on Tuesdays. Anyway, thank you for the reviews and keep reading!

Leigh-Anne xx

This is amazinggg