 smithcrafter 2008-03-09 . chapter 1Hm. I think this is one of those loop activities that Jack will NEVER mention in the real world, will he? |
 vampiratelycan 2008-02-26 . chapter 1I applaud you. I salute the General and giggle at the Colonels misfortune. Brill. :) |
 Aligewe 2005-05-04 . chapter 1THIS IS HILARIOUS! i COULDN'T STOP LAUGHING! are you gonna write more loop-fanfics? PLEASE??!?! |
 BizzyLizzy 2004-03-26 . chapter 1Very good, Jack getting what's coming to him for a change! |
 DoctorRuth 2003-11-16 . chapter 1 lol, thats all i have to say :) |
 The Rose 2003-11-03 . chapter 1 OMG! *rotflmao* I'm laughing so hard this series of yours should be called "Window Pains". Ow my ribs! :-D |
 SSD 2002-08-31 . chapter 1 Hil-freaking-larious. *starts a 'we want more loops' chant* |
 Clez 2002-07-20 . chapter 1This one was great... I'd like to have a go at shooting him with paintball myself. Good idea... if you have anymore... keep 'em coming. Well done indeed.
Clez |
 miscbills 2002-05-27 . chapter 1Hehehehe, that is really funny. |
 Harriet 2002-05-27 . chapter 1LMAO! Very funny. |
 Liv 2002-05-27 . chapter 1 Love it! love it! love it! love it!!
sooooo very very very funny!!
i repeat: love it, love it!
wow!!
*snigger*
hehehehehe
"see you next loop" |
 J 2002-05-27 . chapter 1 lol, that woz funny! love all the loops so far, write more! |
 Teri 2002-05-27 . chapter 1 Wonderful as always. I could just picture Jack's face! |